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BDSM - An overlapping abbreviation of Bondage and Discipline (BD), Dominance and Submission (DS), Sadism and Masochism (SM). A physical, psychological and usually sexual power-role-play with consensual participants. 

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I love how I go from angst in the last chapter concerning the whole 'whipping' business, to using it in this one. Well, some kinks require me to go that little bit further.

It isn't great, but it's not the worst. To be honest, I think it came out pretty well, considering I've re-written it about 10 times now. I just couldn't get the whole BDSM element into the actual sex (it made it seem very...eh) so I left it to the foreplay. Trust me to leave the worst ones till the end. 

Also, Marik is difficult to write. I've been so used to writing him as this evil character, that when I try and lay off with the evil for a bit, he ends up being portrayed as this messy pile of 'what the fuck is this?' 

This is set whenever you want it to be. After Battle City, before. Either way, we both know that Marik would be into a little power-play. He's had mind slaves before, so it certainly wouldn't be out of the question.

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What... in the name of Ra.......... did I find.................................. I'm not like this at all...............